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The Tale of Two Shorts

May 27, 2010  Author: Anthony Pacheco Category: The Craft, The Wife Unit   4 Comments

Short #1: Despite ending and starting a new contract (one which keeps me busy, busy, busy), I finished my short I’ve referenced in this post.

It took me two rewrites to get it to a point where I was happy. During the last, the story took on a bleak tone despite the Hero Protagonist being an upbeat, happy-go-lucky guy. Poor Arune. I actually feel bad.

Short stories do not come easily for me, but I can see their value as a way to improve my novel-writing. Hitting a limitation of 7,500 words really threw me for a loop and I agonized for hours over what to cut and what to leave. It’s much easier making a 110k novel a 100k novel than it is to make a 10k short a 7.5k short.

But I did it.

Now for those of you volunteering to read it and wondering what it isn’t in your mailbox, I want The Wife Unit to read it first. Mainly because she proofreads, mainly because, well, she’s The Wife Unit. There are some perks, yanno.

So expect it in yer box, soon. Thank you for your patience.

Short #2: I actually turned in another short, to a brand-spanky-new publication, and had a great conversation with the new editor. The short is an except from my novel Bunny Noir, but it stands alone as far as a short story.

The fun thing, though, before I submitted it, I took this chapter and made it dark. Dark and twisted. It was already a bit gloomy, but I felt compelled to bump it up a notch, and the result, I do believe, is delicious. If it passes muster, I can’t wait to see it in print. Who can resist Lesbian Alien Libertarian Gun Nut Fiction?

Man I love writing, love it a lot. Even when I was pulling my hair out, the end result was worth it.

4 comments on: The Tale of Two Shorts

  1. J.C May 27, 2010 at 2:12 pm


  2. Lady Glamis May 27, 2010 at 4:58 pm

    Are you going to enter my short story contest? I hope so!

    • Anthony May 27, 2010 at 8:51 pm

      Yes, I am. That would be Short #1.

      Although, I sometimes wonder if I’ve burnt all my talent in the ’90s doing corporate hack writing, leaving behind a shell that can’t do fiction for love or money.

      At least I can keep my blog harem entertained!

  3. Anthony May 27, 2010 at 5:40 pm

    The short has passed The Wife Unit test and is now mailed off.

    Anyone else who wants it, be sure to let me know! It’s sci-fi with a side of, um, more sci-fi.

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