Line Edits, Part 2

I received very targeted feedback on a mechanical problem with Armageddon’s Princess.

And it was dead on, with bonus laser focus.

So I am going through the manuscript again, line-by-line, making the occasional edit.

Sound onoerous?

It’s not. It’s not because I love this story. I love it very much. I love you Armageddon’s Princess. What a fun little number you are. If you were chocolate I would eat you. OM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM.

Anyway, that’s where I’m at. I have a couple of partials out, but I’m not particularly worried about those. The novel has a distinctive, page-turning voice, and when I fix my little technical problem, it will be even better.