A Princess, teh Bunneh and Goblin Ninjas. On fire.

I Love You!

I have just finished Chapter Fifteen of YOUR LITTLE SISTER.

I rewrote it seven times.

I am sure if I had not gotten to know all my online writer friends, I would have become very frustrated at about rewrite three. Now, after determining that the rewrite was CRAP, I would simply mentally shrug and start anew.

I admit, part of this was self-defense against my Blog Harem(TM). But, mostly, I am inspired by all the positive energy for writing. So I just kept at it until it made sense in context with the rest of the story and was, in the end, NOT CRAP, not even transitional. In the end, I really like Chapter Fifteen. It is creepy and disturbing and oh so filled with tension.

Thus, I love you all. I give you literary smooches.

Smooch!

So, um, who wants to read it?

;-)

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8 Responses

  1. Wait, are you giving away sample chapters?

    I should have known there would be harem perks. Oh well. Height requirement and whatnot.

    April 30, 2009 at 10:41 pm

    • There’s a height requirement?

      Memory fuzzy.

      May 1, 2009 at 10:22 am

  2. J.C

    me me me me me!!!
    Good on you for working at it until you felt good about it :-)

    April 30, 2009 at 11:24 pm

  3. Sent.

    May 1, 2009 at 10:22 am

  4. J.C

    thanks!!!

    May 1, 2009 at 1:23 pm

  5. bjkeltz

    “who wants to read it…” well, duh, Anthony. Where’s mine? hehehe

    May 1, 2009 at 4:11 pm

  6. bjkeltz

    Kiersten I”m just over 5 feet…no height requirements, sorry, lol.

    Anthony…got it, devoured it, now going back to savor it.

    May 2, 2009 at 3:44 pm

  7. Alas, BJ, I’m just *under* five feet.

    May 5, 2009 at 3:46 pm

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