Grump

I took a page out of Kiersten’s recent run-ins with the delete key and deleted an entire chapter from Your Little Sister.

I cannot help but feel a little foolish. I was enamored of the writing, specifically of the characterization and setting, but I royally boofed the plotting. It made no sense and actually had a plot hole you could drive a SUV through.

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My first major cuts on Your Little Sister. This is better than I was doing on Bunny Trouble, so I should not complain too much. Its a learning process, but I wish I did not feel I wasted my time because deep down, I know I did not.

It is where the cerebral meets the practical. I spent time writing that deleted chapter, and now that I know how to put in a better one, I have to wait because right now I am too sleepy to function.

Weeeeeee!