Over half of my Beta Readers wanted more of the alien.
Are you sure? Are you really sure that is what you want? Okay. I give you MORE ALIEN:
The local cops called them meth maggots; the populace called them tweakers. She chose to think of them as low-hanging fruit.
How awesome is that sentence? Huh? Let me answer that question for you. It is dipped in awesomesauce that is what! That sentence is so awesome, when I wrote it I caused all fertile women within three miles of me to ovulate spontaneously.
I printed out the new scene and rubbed the paper all over my body, singing, “Who’s the man! Who’s the man!” It is that good.