A Princess, teh Bunneh and Goblin Ninjas. On fire.

Mouhahaha!

Bunny Trouble claims another victim as an additional beta reader reports that he could not put down the manuscript and thoroughly enjoyed it.

Of course, Caroline the English teacher could come back with YOUR PROSE BLOWS, but I think it is safe to say the basics of the plot, theme and my characters are sound. I have reached critical mass.

Get it? CRITICAL mass? Ha ha ha I kill myself, I really do.

2 Responses

  1. J.C

    lol great stuff. So you just have one beta reader left to get back to you about it?

    October 16, 2008 at 3:46 pm

  2. I have 3 left.

    **One local who has read it but hasn’t weighed in.
    **Caroline
    **David #2, prime target audience.

    If all 3 came back with “this is crap.” I still have 4 to 3.

    Of course, I would love 7 to 0!

    October 16, 2008 at 4:22 pm

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